Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Life is all about ups and downs.
people
often face to many problematic circumstances in life. Some people go through the worst condition like Suggestion
People
unsatisfactory job
or shortage of money by accepting it, while Suggestion
an unsatisfactory job
other
believe in fighting back and try to progress plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
such
unfortunate situation
. Personally, I completely agree with the second
view.
On the one hand, it sounds good saying for improving bad condition
, Suggestion
the bad condition
however
, evolving is not so easy. Person have to embed every single things
Suggestion
thing
;
Accept space
;
sometime
they have to start from beginning. on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
yet
, the improvement can't be assured. For that reason, people tend to continue with the disappointing Suggestion
Yet
situation
.
On the other hand
, persist with bad conditions is not relaible way
to handle the obstacles of life. We need to work for itSuggestion
a reliable way
reliable way
;
we can just examine, analyse or evaluate the Accept space
;
situation
to find finest solution. There are many ways to conquer it, like, if you are unpleased
with the work ;
you can go for Accept space
;
other
job option, any of various alternatives; some other
another
however
, it's preety
difficult to get one instantly. But, to a moderately sufficient extent or degree
pretty
the more harder
Suggestion
the harder
u
try second person pronoun; the person addressed
you
then
the more success u
get.second person pronoun; the person addressed
you
For instance
, in my neighborhood
, there was a student who was born in a poor family, his parents were farmers and did not have enough money to pay for fees if he had gone to the university. It was admirable that he a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
try
his best in study and gained the scholarship of his Suggestion
tries
favorite
university and became an official student. After that, by his efforts every day, when he graduated, he became a professional doctor as he desired and has earned a lot of money per month. Thence, he and his parents have had a something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
more wonderful
life with adequate convenience.
All in all, as the perception varies from person to person; so way of tackling the Suggestion
most wonderful
situation
also
totally depend on individual believes. But, I prefer trying hard
to improve bad condition rather Suggestion
harder
then
staying in it because conjunction used in comparatives
than
hardwork
is the key to success.Suggestion
hard work
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