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Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter • explain the reasons for the noise • apologize • describe what action you will take

#neighbors #noise #house #action
Dear Pallavi,
I’m
 writing
you
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 to apologize for the noise from which you are getting disturbed.
Actually
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 I’ve recently shifted here and
I’m
 making few amendments in the flat because of which
such
 noise is being created. I’ve shifted from Dwarka so half of my furniture was left which
I’m
 bringing it now.
Also
, because of the drilling machine and so much
labor
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 working in my
flat
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 the noise is heard.
I’m
 changing the
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woodwork
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wood
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woodwork
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work
 and the tiles of the flat
that is
 the reason it is taking so much
of
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time. I can understand the disturbance you are facing because of me but I promise I’ll ask the
labor
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 to shut the doors and windows before starting their
work
, do their
work
 quietly and fastly.
I’m
 very sorry that you have to go through all the disturbance but I assure you that within a day or two all the
work
 would be completed and I hope in future
their
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 won’t be any reason for
such
 complaints. Thank You Regards Vaishali
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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