In many Countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of Crime? How can we deal with those causes?

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How to reduce the crime rate? A question every government struggle to answer it. Many governments are trying to address
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question by building bigger and bigger prisons but yet ineffective.
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essay discusses the reason for
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a rise in the crime rate while
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shedding some light over the possible solutions. Crimes have
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the daily life of a common man. One of the primary reasons is an increase in poverty. In
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modern era, it is quite difficult for a poor person to meet his necessities and sometimes it even leaves him and his children hungry.
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, the rise in violent crimes can be easily seen in developing countries, especially in Africa. Another reason is an increase in violent games, cartoon and movies. It can be seen often in a movie that a boy goes on a rampage to get the love of his life. These examples leave negativity on a kid’s mind and in return, he tries to follow it.
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, most sophisticated yet most dangerous version
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web crime
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a web crime
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life, but
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has provided new fraudulent ways.
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, Dark web, where all the criminals
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as hackers, kidnappers, and etc.
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Trade
their illegal activities in cryptographic currency. Mild crimes are turning into ferocious crimes with soft punishment which most of the governments are offering.
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sentencing prison
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sentencing, prison
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does not create fear into other beings. The punishment happens behind the curtain and the person returns after a period of time. To tackle
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, criminals should face hard punishments and in front of the public which will create fear among people and they will think twice before committing a grave sin. Alternatively, the government should
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take proper measures to tackle poverty and create a safe environment where foreign and local investment can be welcomed. In conclusion, it is very unfortunate that felonies are increasing day by day in
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modern society. In my opinion, the government should take proper measures to counter it
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic disparity
  • propensity
  • recidivism
  • deterrent
  • rehabilitative
  • judicial system
  • corruption
  • socioeconomic
  • alienation
  • stigmatization
  • decriminalization
  • enforcement
  • gentrification
  • preemptive measures
  • intervention strategies
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