Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: • give details about the order you made • explain what was wrong with the item • tell the company what you want them to do about it

#company #item

Dear Sir,

I’m

writing to you regarding the Moto E

phone

that I purchased from your website, but

I’m

very disappointed as the

phone

isn’t working. On 21st August, 19 I purchased

this

phone

which got delivered to me on 26th August, 19. I tried to switch it on but

I’m

failing to do that every time. Since the day it got delivered

I’m

trying really hard to make it work but somehow it’s not even switching on. I’ve attached my bill receipt and the order details of

this

phone

this

mail itself for your reference. I would like you to return back my money or deliver a new

phone

of the same company & model

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my address. I had a very bad experience with your company. Hope you won’t let down your loyal customer and will surely take

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strict action against it soon, as I mentioned

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to you above. Yours Faithfully Vaishali

Submitted by vaishalibhardwaj2010 on Mon Sep 02 2019

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2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

157 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: • give details about the order you made • explain what was wrong with the item • tell the company what you want them to do about it

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter describe a news story in your country explain why people are interested in it say how the story personally relates to you

Inventors are not as important to society as doctors. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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you are living in adeveloping country and people moving to developed country. local government conducting a survey. option A - rich countries are stealing people from poor countries option B - this is a part of natural movement of professionals around the world.