Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Childhood obesity is becoming a problem throughout the developed world.Because of this, some people think that adverts for fast food, sweets and sugary snacks should not be allowed in schools and colleges. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

As of recently, childhood obesity has increased and

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mainly due to the

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the act of increasing (something) in size or volume or quantity or scope

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of the fast food market. Nowadays, the

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something that seduces or has the quality to seduce

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of food has reached new heights as everywhere you g adverts are hung up: Delicious burgers and sugary sweets.

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obesity has shown to be a lifelong problem and not just baby fat.

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brings illnesses and reduces the life of these children. Many people believe that the way to combat

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to remove adverts from public places especially schools and colleges. For sure the kids are

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more motivated to lose the weight and

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focus on replacing their bad habits with

excersice

the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit

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and a

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healthier

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,

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of removing

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a better and more effective way to

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contribute to the progress or growth of

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the kids would be to simply raise

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having knowledge of

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about obesity and its dangers.

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, with lessons that teach them how to eat better and

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the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit

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more frequently would be more beneficial. For

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to be taught at a young age is crucially important.

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, removing the adverts can

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help them stay on the right track with their own self without the school's help. They can be tempted less and be more

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inspired with confidence

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to lose the weight and achieve a better lifestyle that fits

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uniquely. A well-rounded solution would be to hang inspirational quotes around

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the activities of educating or instructing; activities that impart knowledge or skill

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; about both weight loss and other important issues. Overall,

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think that while it could be motivational for the adverts to be removed, that simply will not cause the change

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needed. It is of

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of the greatest possible degree or extent or intensity

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importance that

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issue has better solutions since it can be like a life sentence for some. In my opinion raising

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having knowledge of

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schools, for

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an item of information that is typical of a class or group

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would be more beneficial.