Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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Internet is considered to be one of the most effective

medium

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mediums

for reading news for a majority of

people

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people, however

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newspaper has mostly been the crucial way of reading the news for an ample amount of people. In my opinion, newspapers are an

irreplacable

impossible to replace

irreplaceable

source of providing news because they have been able to reach a wide range of people where it is in rural areas or urban areas.

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The Digital Age is all about technology and switching from physical to virtual.

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why plethora of people prefer to read news via the internet yet they have not been able to provide the information in the most systematic manner because of which newspapers have always outperformed the digital medium of news by the widespread of

accessibility

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access

accessible

to every home.

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, they have the potential to cater to a

humungous

(used informally) very large

humongous

amount of readers through their wide network and the trust, loyalty, reliability and dependence of their audience

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for

with

them which the digital medium has not been able to do till date.

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is because the newspapers have been

into

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existence

since

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for

so many

years whereas

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years, whereas

the internet has been not able to make a mark as they have been introduced only a few years ago. Internet or the digital source of news

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lags way behind the newspapers because of their

inavailability

the quality of not being available when needed

unavailability

in low key areas and small towns and cities. Even though

internet

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the internet

has the potential to reach more people in less amount of

time but

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time, but

still a lot of improvement is required so as to make it a viable option to provide news to the masses. Newspaper

on the other hand

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is already established and has been successful in

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fast-paced digital era to be able to fulfil the demands of the readers. People who are not tech-savvy or technologically advanced or technologically illiterate

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feel a great deal of burden on their shoulders to get access to the latest news and

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is why they opt for newspapers. T

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te, newspapers are easily available and most reliable source of reading news for all sections of th

e society

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society, be

be it rich or poor, young or old, black or white, people in villages or the people in metropolitans

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

370 words

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