some people think it is more important for government to spend money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is some debate that whether political leaders should spend the nation’s budget on encouraging people to get access to a healthy

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or curing those already sick. From my personal perspective, I would say that the following one is much more necessary. On one hand, a healthy

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is really important and it could be taken into consideration that the

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should spend a certain amount of money on.

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is because as a means of preventing illness, a healthy

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could do well in order to repel some particular sicknesses. To be more specific, according to some experts, people who intend to gain a healthy

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could have a better body’s protection system than those careless o

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is a favourite type of

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of some serious effects afterwards

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as obesity and h

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problems caused by consuming too much.

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, those who stay away from eating that sort seem to be less facing illness than others. Having said that, promoting a healthy

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by creating more public facilities in order to convince people to do exercises or launching campaigns to encourage residents to get rid of bad habits including eating too much junk

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, alcohol or smoking is really essential nowadays.

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, there are several reasons why the

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should allocate more money on treating people who are already sick.

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of all, a healthy

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depends heavily on people’s perceptive.

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, it could be a waste of money on promoting a healthy

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people might abandon those because of others appealing habits like consuming fast

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, playing computer games or drinking alcohol.

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, these days a great deal of illness comes from outside factors

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as contamination, hesitation and plagues,

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, a healthy

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protect people from those implements.

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, in many mega cities in the world

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people are suffering from air pollution caused by the release of transportation and irresponsible disposal of industrial zone’s gas.

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, the

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should provide adequate budget into study for ill people. In conclusion, regardless of some important reasons of promoting a healthy

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, the

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should spend more budget on the treatment of sick people.