some people think it is more important for government to spend money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is some debate that whether political leaders should spend the nation’s budget on encouraging people to get access to a healthy

lifestyle

or curing those already sick. From my personal perspective, I would say that the following one is much more necessary. On one hand, a healthy

lifestyle

is really important and it could be taken into consideration that the

government

should spend a certain amount of money on.

This

is because as a means of preventing illness, a healthy

lifestyle

could do well in order to repel some particular sicknesses. To be more specific, according to some experts, people who intend to gain a healthy

lifestyle

could have a better body’s protection system than those careless o

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it. Take fast

food

as an example,

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is a favourite type of

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eat, regardless

of some serious effects afterwards

such

as obesity and h

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problems caused by consuming too much.

Thus

, those who stay away from eating that sort seem to be less facing illness than others. Having said that, promoting a healthy

lifestyle

by creating more public facilities in order to convince people to do exercises or launching campaigns to encourage residents to get rid of bad habits including eating too much junk

food

, alcohol or smoking is really essential nowadays.

On the other hand

, there are several reasons why the

government

should allocate more money on treating people who are already sick.

First

of all, a healthy

lifestyle

depends heavily on people’s perceptive.

Therefore

, it could be a waste of money on promoting a healthy

lifestyle

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infrastructures, or

c

ampaigns but

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campaigns, but

people might abandon those because of others appealing habits like consuming fast

food

, playing computer games or drinking alcohol.

Secondly

, these days a great deal of illness comes from outside factors

such

as contamination, hesitation and plagues,

hence

, a healthy

lifestyle

obviously c

an not

can not

cannot

protect people from those implements.

For example

, in many mega cities in the world

such

as b

eijng,

capital of the People's Republic of China in the Hebei province in northeastern China; 2nd largest Chinese city

Beijing

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anoi

the capital city of Vietnam; located in North Vietnam

Hanoi

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people are suffering from air pollution caused by the release of transportation and irresponsible disposal of industrial zone’s gas.

Thus

, the

government

should provide adequate budget into study for ill people. In conclusion, regardless of some important reasons of promoting a healthy

lifestyle

, the

government

should spend more budget on the treatment of sick people.