Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Friends are meant to be lifetime companions. We make friendships across all stages our
life starting
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life, starting
from
kindergarden
a preschool for children age 4 to 6 to prepare them for primary school
kindergarten
to college, from office to post retirement. Our
buddies
the entire structure of an organism (an animal, plant, or human being)
bodies
remains
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remain
with us in all moments of our life span.
However
, it is highly debatable whether one should choose friends having
same mindset
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the same mindset
as us or choose someone who does not be
in
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on
same page
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the same page
as yours in few occasions. I personally feel that we should make pals who does not align with us on every time but have different views in few occasions. Friends with same mindset seems easy going for some. I feel personalities having problem with acceptance of criticism should make friends having identical views.
Moreover
, people with less intentions of arguing or have confrontations issues tends to choose friends with similar thought process. I feel
this
seems perfect because a group with similar thinking will remain happy and strongly bonded since there should not be any sort of argument or serious debate that might
effect
have an effect upon
affect
individuals.
This
will
also
help in making a collective effort for
few occasions
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the few occasions
a few occasions
where team cohesion is needed.
Such
peaceful atmosphere
wont
will not
won't
be present if we make friends whose views differs from us on some
occassions
something you have to do
occasions
. Humans are not perfect and after parents if we listen or accept someone
that is
our
friends
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friend
. There will be instances where we might make mistakes and none but
such
pals will criticize us and help us to think and rectify ourselves.
For example
, if we make some important decisions we can consult my buddy having different
opinion which
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opinion, which
further
helps me to think in
more diverse way
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more diverse ways
a more diverse way
.
This
advantage
wont
will not
won't
be available if we make friends with similar mindset. In conclusion, I must admit that buddies with other opinions at some point is most important.Doing
this
we can learn, rectify ourselves in our lifetime because improving yourselves constantly is the way of life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • harmonious
  • stress-free
  • disagreements
  • conflicts
  • reinforce
  • validate
  • comforting
  • reassuring
  • broaden your understanding
  • perspectives
  • challenge intellectually
  • think critically
  • personal growth
  • development
  • healthy debates
  • communication skills
  • mutual respect
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