Some people think that excessive use of smart phones badly affects teenagers’ literacy skills. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #phones #teenagers’ #literacy #skills

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

It is argued by a few individuals that extreme

usage

Use synonyms

of mobile phones has detrimental effects on adolescent’s education. I completely agree with

this

Linking Words

statement.

This

Linking Words

essay will explain 2 fundamental reasons to illustrate how addiction to mobiles is causing a damaging effect on young children's academic scores.

Firstly

Linking Words

, excess

usage

Use synonyms

of cell phone is causing physical

health

Use synonyms

problems, and thereby, affecting children’s academic performance.

Although

Linking Words

youngsters are cautioned by elders, about the negative ramifications produced by

this

Linking Words

gadget, children are still desperate to use them as they enjoy playing games and accessing social media.

Moreover

Linking Words

, many children are sacrificing sleep in order to spend more time with the gadget.

As a result

Linking Words

, youngsters are prone to various

health

Use synonyms

problems

such

Linking Words

as loss of eye visibility, fatigue, obesity, etc. Thereby, they are unable to concentrate on academics and

hence

Linking Words

are failing to achieve viable scores. In a recent survey conducted by BBC among young children, it was found that only 50% of students who use mobile frequently were able to achieve average pass marks.

On the other hand

Linking Words

, 90% of students who do not consume mobile phone are able to achieve the same. Another major concern is that,

this

Linking Words

also

Linking Words

resulting in mental

health

Use synonyms

issues and thereby indirectly impacting student’s scores. Mobile games these days promote violence and children are certainly attracted to

such

Linking Words

games due to the thrill that they provide.

However

Linking Words

this

Linking Words

results in adverse effects on child’s psychological

health

Use synonyms

as the child is constantly exposed to

such

Linking Words

fierce environment.

Although

Linking Words

the youngster’s play these games virtually, it is due to human psychology that they get impacted in their daily life due to the illusions that are formed in the brain.

For instance

Linking Words

, recent news reported that, 1929 teenager’s committed suicide globally as they were deeply involved in playing a game called Pub-G.

Also

Linking Words

, high performing students who got gradually addicted to

this

Linking Words

game have failed in the majority of subjects. In conclusion, repeated

usage

Use synonyms

of mobile device renders bad academic scores as students using

this

Linking Words

gadget get physically and mentally sick.

Hence

Linking Words

, mobile

usage

Use synonyms

should be limited.

Submitted by Kavitha on Wed Sep 04 2019

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

11
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

351 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5
band
Some people say that the only way to get success is to go to universities while others think that it depends on other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over how to become a high-achiever. While some claim that getting to institutions is the sole tactic to become fruitfulness. Although each has its own perks, I would contend that it is optimal to combine both mentioned factors.
9
band
some people said professionals such as doctors or engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training while other said they should be free to work in another country
Some argue for mandatory work in a specific study location, while others champion the freedom to work in various countries. Personally, I align with the latter perspective.
8
band
Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, some people insist that wildlife animals are unnecessary things in modern society, so the preservation ecosystem is neglected as it requires a lot of money and resources. However, many proponents opine conservation of wildlife is a crucial point due to these beneficial advantages of the balance of the ecology and the security of the food supply. I am convinced by the latter opinion, so I firmly agree with them.
8
band
You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • tell your friend why you are having a party • explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe • invite your friend to the party
How have you been? I missed the wonderful time we had together when I was at Tabesh School. I’m going to throw a party for my 25th birthday on 21 September. Because of this party, I decided to try to cook a strange Greek food. I thought it could be a great surprise for my guests.
6.5
band
The large amount of time and money that is spent on conserving wildlife would be better spent on improving the lives of humans. To what extent do you agree or disagree
Wildlife has always been an essential part of our ecosystem, thus, it has to be protected. Nowadays, it is often said that it is beneficial to donate money to conserve the environment. At the same time, however, others believe that such money would be better spent on topics related to humans, namely, decreasing the costs of life, developing social care, etc. While each of these views has both pros and cons, I believe that it is more beneficial to protect nature rather than humans.

Some people think that excessive use of smart phones badly affects teenagers’ literacy skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that the only way to get success is to go to universities while others think that it depends on other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

some people said professionals such as doctors or engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training while other said they should be free to work in another country

Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The large amount of time and money that is spent on conserving wildlife would be better spent on improving the lives of humans. To what extent do you agree or disagree