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You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In you letter: say which advertisement you are answering describe which courses you want to teach, and what they would be about explain why you would be a suitable teacher

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I am writing to City Evening School about an advertisement I saw in Toronto News on August 31, 2019. It states that you are looking for a night teacher. I am interested to teach
a French and Ukrainian
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French and Ukrainian languages
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languages
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. I had
a
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previous experience
in
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teaching both
languages
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 in Maine, USA
last
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 summer. I know that a region, Mississauga,
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 a huge Ukrainian community
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 will definitely be eager to learn or improve
Ukrainian
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the Ukrainian
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 language.
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, as French is a
second
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 national language in Canada, I think it will be useful for many people to learn it. Both
coureses
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courses
 would be a basic level for people who are just starting learning
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.
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, I have not seen those courses in the list of the courses you are offering, so it would be interesting to see how many people want to learn those
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. If you are interested, you can reach me at
gmail
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Gmail
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. Do not hesitate and write
me
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to me
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 if you have any
further
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 questions. I will be happy to clarify and answer
to
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all of them. Hope to hear from you soon.
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Your
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 faithfully, Kseniya Krasyuk

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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