You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In you letter: say which advertisement you are answering describe which courses you want to teach, and what they would be about explain why you would be a suitable teacher

I am writing to City Evening School about an advertisement I saw in Toronto News on August 31, 2019. It states that you are looking for a night teacher. I am interested to teach

a French and Ukrainian

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. I had

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previous experience

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teaching both

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in Maine, USA

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summer. I know that a region, Mississauga,

have

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a huge Ukrainian community

who

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will definitely be eager to learn or improve

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the Ukrainian

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language.

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, as French is a

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national language in Canada, I think it will be useful for many people to learn it. Both

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courses

would be a basic level for people who are just starting learning

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, I have not seen those courses in the list of the courses you are offering, so it would be interesting to see how many people want to learn those

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. If you are interested, you can reach me at

gmail

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. Do not hesitate and write

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to me

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if you have any

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questions. I will be happy to clarify and answer

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all of them. Hope to hear from you soon.

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Your

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faithfully, Kseniya Krasyuk

Sep 4, 2019

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

187 words

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