Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?
Some workers get little or no exercise either during the
work
days or in their spare time
, and have certain health issues as a consequence. In this
essay, I discuss some of the problems resulting in this
, and also
suggest some possible solutions on how to tackle it.
To begin
with, one of the reasons why people are not getting enough exercise is because of the company’s policies. Companies would want to make profit
and in doing so would engage employees all day in order to increase productivity. Suggestion
a profit
For instance
, a firm who has target deliver a 3000 metric tonne of rice per day would not want to give its employees any form of time
form leisure. When the employees get home, there is little time
to involve in other activities to keep fit. To deal with this
problem, trade unions in collaboration with the government should enact a law regulating the number of hours an employee must work
in a day. Doing so will enable workers to have time
to engage in other that will improve their well being such
as sports.
Furthermore
, another rationale why working people are not having enough time
to exercise is because they want to earn more money. They believe that the more time
they spend at w
ork including
overtime, the more money they would earn, Accept comma addition
work, including
thus
forgetting that this
have a detrimental effects
on their health. Suggestion
effect
For example
, The Sunday Sun recently reported that 39% of those working in Manchester, UK would prefer to work
overtime to earn more rather than close early to partake in physical excersise.
To tackle the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
exercises
this
problem, the government should enact a law mandating all companies to establish a fitness center
in their facilities. The law should an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
also
ensure that all staffs are given certain
Suggestion
a certain time
time
out of work
to use the fitness center.
In conclusion, there are a number of challenges being faced by those working, while san area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
ome some
of these challenges are mquantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity
some
anmade,
they are not insurmountable. In my view, it is the gSuggestion
man made
overnemt
responsibility to solve the problems and they should begin by looking at some of the sthe organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
olution
proposed above.Suggestion
solutions
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