Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Some workers get little or no exercise either during the
work
days or in their spare
time
, and have certain health issues as a consequence. In
this
essay, I discuss some of the problems resulting in
this
, and
also
suggest some possible solutions on how to tackle it.
To begin
with, one of the reasons why people are not getting enough exercise is because of the company’s policies. Companies would want to make p
rofit
Suggestion
a profit
and in doing so would engage employees all day in order to increase productivity.
For instance
, a firm who has target deliver a 3000 metric tonne of rice per day would not want to give its employees any form of
time
form leisure. When the employees get home, there is little
time
to involve in other activities to keep fit. To deal with
this
problem, trade unions in collaboration with the government should enact a law regulating the number of hours an employee must
work
in a day. Doing so will enable workers to have
time
to engage in other that will improve their well being
such
as sports.
Furthermore
, another rationale why working people are not having enough
time
to exercise is because they want to earn more money. They believe that the more
time
they spend at
w
ork including
Accept comma addition
work, including
overtime, the more money they would earn,
thus
forgetting that
this
have a detrimental e
ffects
Suggestion
effect
on their health.
For example
, The Sunday Sun recently reported that 39% of those working in Manchester, UK would prefer to
work
overtime to earn more rather than close early to partake in physical e
xcersise.
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
exercises
To tackle
this
problem, the government should enact a law mandating all companies to establish a fitness c
enter
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
in their facilities. The law should
also
ensure that all staffs are given c
ertain
Suggestion
a certain time
time
out of
work
to use the fitness c
enter.
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
In conclusion, there are a number of challenges being faced by those working, while s
ome some
quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity
some
of these challenges are m
anmade,
Suggestion
man made
they are not insurmountable. In my view, it is the g
overnemt
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
responsibility to solve the problems and they should begin by looking at some of the s
olution
Suggestion
solutions
proposed above.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Time constraints
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Passive leisure activities
  • Workplace wellness programs
  • Active commuting
  • Subsidized
  • Public awareness
  • Health benefits
  • Incentivizing
  • Accessible public spaces
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