countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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, plethora of amenities
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available in today's world about products. Nowadays we can buy
any thing
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anything
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anywhere
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As well as I think that it can be have some negative points in
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comparison
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notion, there are ample good points about
products
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the products
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and foremost is that
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in today's era human can buy
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around them which product
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available in
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
part of overseas.
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, it can be helpful for people
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they can get
same products
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the same products
in their same
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a politically organized body of people under a single government
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countries
county
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is that, it
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can also grow
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grew
countries economy
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the country's economy
country's economy
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, if our
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buy
same products
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the same products
from other countries and if our
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export any products in overseas so by that economy can be
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increased
. Paradoxically, it
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has some negative development.
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as
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reputation of products. As an evidence, if we get same things which sells in
other
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another
part of
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the nation
a nation
, so it can be reduced the popularity of products by that particular company of that
products
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product
can be loose
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can lose
can be lose
their value about that
products
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product
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, in India some products are much popular
such
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as
patola
a small flat triangular bone in front of the knee that protects the knee joint
patella
from Patan
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saris from Surat and other things so if other countries start to sell
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same
products
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product
in their
country
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so
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in
India it may create a situation of loosing that
products
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product's
reputation. Agglomerating, all is all points elaborated
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above, it
can be concluded that
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getting same products in our
country
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same as other nations is good things for population, but it may
also
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create some negative development.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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