The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Cars

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introduced in 1888 as mode of commute on British road.

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number

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the number

a number

of cars on

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the road

roads

has increased by

tremendous amount

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the tremendous amount

a tremendous amount

tremendous amounts

by 2000 and its it very crucial to acknowledge

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growing vehicle population on

road

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the road

. In my opinion, governing bodies should focus on the alternate travel solutions and make sure to apply strategies in order to control

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increase in cars.

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situation is a cause of worry for air pollution, traffic,

noise pollution

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noise, pollution

and all these summing up to human health. Unlike in the past, it is easier to buy or own a car nowadays. Schemes like bank supporting loans and EMI are all promoting these purchases.

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, we can see more than 1 car in a house.

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this

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has

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become a status

symbol

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symbol, then

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just being a mode of commute. Government should act now until it's too late and release some policies which should restrict buying multiple vehicles in one house. They should promote

eco

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Eco

drive modes like

cycle which

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cycle, which

benefits to the health of the individual and the

enviornment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

. They should

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focus on making public transport more convenient so that most of the people should prefer those

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of cars. In conclusion, it is the need of time that we should focus on alternative transport solutions like public transport, cycle, car pool of we want healthy living. Only the government with its policies and action can make

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happen.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

240 words

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public health
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alternative forms of transport
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Fully explain your ideas

Some commentators feel that grandparents should live together with their children and grandchildren, while others say that elderly people should be encouraged to live independently. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion.

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development

You saw an advert in the newspaper asking for volunteers to help run a charity event. Write a letter of application to the organizers. In your letter: -explain why you are interested in helping -Give details suitable past experience -suggest ways you might help with the event.

In some countries, some school leavers choose to work or travel for a year between finishing secondary school and attending university.

With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed?