Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.
Crime is not one of the biggest problems world is facing, but is a result of many problems. It has to be eradicated or at least to be reduced to the extent
that is
possible.Unlike the belief of many people, it can be turned down. In the following we will deal with different aspects that cause the crime and how it can be dealt.
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Firstly
, thefts are mostly done by the people who are below Linking Words
poverty line
. In order to reduce these assaults, they have to be brought up. Suggestion
the poverty line
This
leads to the self dependency and so, reduce the robberies. Linking Words
For example
, if a thief is taught how to stitch clothes and is provided with a sewing machine, he would earn himself and Linking Words
thus
they are above the poverty line.
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Secondly
, most of these criminal cases are filed on illiterates. So, from Linking Words
this
, it can be concluded that illiteracy is Linking Words
also
a major cause for these crimes. Linking Words
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, if we see the statistics, the highest literacy state in India, Linking Words
that is
, Kerala, has the least crime rate. So, if we increase the number of people who can read and write, automatically the these assaults, thefts Linking Words
etc
will be reduced.
To conclude, the illegal and social Suggestion
life curbing
aspects can be reduced. The crime can be dealt only if the underlying problems like increasing the literates, and aiding the public to overcome the poverty line.Accept comma addition
life, curbing
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