Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

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Crime is not one of the biggest problems world is facing, but is a result of many problems. It has to be eradicated or at least to be reduced to the extent
that is
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possible.Unlike the belief of many people, it can be turned down. In the following we will deal with different aspects that cause the crime and how it can be dealt.
Firstly
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, thefts are mostly done by the people who are below
poverty line
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the poverty line
. In order to reduce these assaults, they have to be brought up.
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leads to the self dependency and so, reduce the robberies.
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, if a thief is taught how to stitch clothes and is provided with a sewing machine, he would earn himself and
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they are above the poverty line.
Secondly
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, most of these criminal cases are filed on illiterates. So, from
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, it can be concluded that illiteracy is
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a major cause for these crimes.
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, if we see the statistics, the highest literacy state in India,
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, Kerala, has the least crime rate. So, if we increase the number of people who can read and write, automatically the these assaults, thefts
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will be reduced. To conclude, the illegal and social
life curbing
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life, curbing
aspects can be reduced. The crime can be dealt only if the underlying problems like increasing the literates, and aiding the public to overcome the poverty line.
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