Some people want to be able to contact their employees at all times, even on holidays. Does this development has more advantages than disadvantages?

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It is generally observed that some employers desire to contact their workers at all times, even during h
olidays,
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the holidays
however
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, I am inclined to firmly argue that disadvantages of
this
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development outweigh advantages.
This
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essay will provide the supporting arguments regarding the disadvantages of contacting employees during h
oildays.
leisure time away from work devoted to rest or pleasure
holidays
Although
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, It is true that employers are profit oriented and want to act pessimistic, owing to
this
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reason, whenever they require their employees, they never hesitate a
pproaching
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to approach
them, even on holidays.
This
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sometimes leads to the disruption in personal plans of an employee who might have c
ommited
bound or obligated, as under a pledge to a particular cause, action, or attitude
committed
commented
f
or
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in
to
from
his/her own activities.
Besides
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, If owner a
dapts
choose and follow; as of theories, ideas, policies, strategies or plans
adopts
the habit of i
nterupting
make a break in
interrupting
interpreting
the personal space of workers it might d
emotivate
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workers for p
ursing
following in order to overtake or capture or as accompaniment to such pursuit
pursuing
their career in a specific organisation,
this
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often urge them to look for another job, which assures to interfere least in their private time dedicated to family, friends and t
hemsleves.
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
It is a fact, that sometimes it is direly required to contact an e
mployees
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employee
i
n
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at
their leisure time for the sake of c
ompany's progress
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the company's progress
and prosperity.
In addition
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, some workers like chief e
xecitives
a person responsible for the administration of a business
executives
executive
of the company holds an imperative position to take key decisions for organisational incentives,
thus
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, often needs to be contacted regardless of their v
accations.
the particular occupation for which you are trained
vocation
Nevertheless
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, I strongly disagree to contact the employee for every unconvincing reason. To conclude the aforementioned, I am predisposed to a
grue
be in accord; be in agreement
agree
argue
that it is a normal practice o
f
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for
employers to reach out to employees while they are on holidays,
nonetheless
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, unnecessary practice of
this
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act sometimes brings negative a
ffects
property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business
effects
to employee's routine and personal life.
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