Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty percent over the last fifty years. What can we do to protect the wildlife around the world?

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According to the data published recently, there has been a

decrease

in animal

population

globally over fifty years by around fifty percent. In my opinion, I believe that creating animal rights groups is one major way to combat

this

menace.

Firstly

, in order to reduce the rate at which injustice is meted to animals, it is essential to create animal rights groups. These groups will help increase awareness about the

decrease

in the

population

of animals and

also

educate the world about the importance of preserving the wildlife

population

Furthermore

, the

government

can

also

create laws forbidding the illegal killing of animals, and

also

set fines for defaulters of the law.

For example

, after the Nigerian

government

declared that any animal killer would be sentenced to three years imprisonment, there was a 30 percent

decrease

in the death of animals. Measures like

this

will help regulate the illegal killing of animals. Another point to consider is that animal lives can be preserved by the provision of an alternate source of protein for humans. One major reason why there has been a reduction in a wildlife

population

is that man believes the purpose of animals on earth is mostly to serve as consumption. In order to prevent

this

myth from spreading, the

government

has to create awareness about other sources of protein that are as good as the ones gotten from animals.

For example

, the US

government

is working with an artificial meat company which provides a burger that tastes exactly like animal meat but is not sourced from an animal. Once the

government

keeps sponsoring discoveries like

this

the need to kill animals for food will automatically

decrease

. In conclusion, in order to preserve wildlife, it is essential that the

government

punishes anyone that kills any animal and

also

promote discoveries of alternate source of meat for humans.

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Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty percent over the last fifty years. What can we do to protect the wildlife around the world?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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