Smoking not only harms the smoker but also those who are nearby. Therefore smoking should be banned in public places. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Medical studies have shown that smoking not only affects the health of the

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smokers, but

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has several ill-effects on the people close by.

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, many are of the opinion that it should restrict smoking in public areas.

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there are views on both sides, I strongly believe that putting a ban is the most appropriate course of action. The opponents of

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argument think so because they have a carefree attitude.

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,

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people do not worry about how their actions can harm them and other people in their vicinity.

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, people

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smoke, on

footpath without considering that other people may feel uncomfortable and they do not have an option to move away in case it suffocates them. Without a doubt, legislation on smoking in public areas is needed to protect people who do not smoke.

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a plethora of convincing arguments in favour of a ban.

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, tobacco contains carcinogenic components that can cause breathing problems and lungs or throat cancer

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people who consume it and

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to people who indirectly inhale smoke.

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, young children and old people who have weaker respiratory systems compared to adults are more prone to

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diseases. 

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, smoking in public fascinates young children to delve into it.

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, teenagers and school-going children get attracted to cigarettes without being aware of its consequences. Indeed, smoking in public places not just affects

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health, but

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spoils youth. In conclusion, it is clear that the government should ban

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the consumption

of tobacco in public places. To achieve it, there should be dedicated areas for smoking and strict punishments should be imposed on people who fail to comply.

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improves the

heath

a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease

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of thousands of people and is most definitely a positive development.