Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation , such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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however
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others believe that Accept space
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one
should try his best to overcome bad situation
and improve it which would be far better than just to accept it .
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such
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and they have to manage their finance
to meet daily requirements.
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some people are Accept space
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in contrast
to former's view and they believe people should trt
to make their situations better rather than to accept it. It is true if make an effort or attempt
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money can not be Accept space
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constraints, but
such
situation
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people should look for alternatives to improve Accept space
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such
situations. If one
is not satisfied with the working environment as well as with the work itself ,
he should continue it for Accept space
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a better way
better ways
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situations but
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