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In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

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Over the past few years, technological advancements have brought an improvement in
agricultural sector
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the agricultural sector
 over the world.
However
, many people still suffer from hunger.
This
 essay is going to discuss the cause of
this
problem
 and how to approach the
problem
. Even though the technology helps farmers
to increase
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increase
 the yield and profit, but there are always two sides of a coin. Interesting reason is that it increases
food
 prices. Tools and machines for farming and harvesting are expensive, leading to rise of
capital cost
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the capital cost
 of
food
.
As a result
, low income consumers cannot afford the
food
 and become suffer from hunger. A
further
 aspect of
this
problems
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problem
 is that climate change is
also
 the root cause of
this
problem
. Climate change has so much affect to farming. Take Africa,
for example
, there is no rain for several months
in
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on
this
 continent.
Hence
, it is impossible to grow crops. People in
this
 area have to depend on other
food
 sources. If it is not available, they will face a
food
 lacking situation. There are various ways to solve these problems.
First
, government should maintain the
food
 price, so low income residents can afford the
food
.
Secondly
, the solution for climate change
problem
 is that government should ensure that there is a
food
 reserve enough for the season that cannot grow crops by trading with other countries. In conclusion,
although
 our agricultural technology is far advance from the past, the
starving
provide with staff
staffing
 problems still exist all over the world. These problems are caused by the higher
food
 cost and insufficient resources. To settle the problems, the government should control and maintain the
food
 price and ensure that
food
 reserve is always available for the country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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