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Now people spend less and less time at home. What are the causes? What are the effects on individual and society?

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Nowadays people like to spend their most of
time
 outside rather than
home
. They spent their
time
 with friends
instead
 of family. The
first
 and foremost reason for
this
 is youth is
insterested
having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
 in different types of activities which were not active before. They cannot sit at
home
 give
time
objective case of they
them
 to family members. As the
time
 passes, everything has changed.
Morever
in addition
Moreover
, they spent most of their
time
 outside
enjoy
Suggestion
enjoying
 with their friends. The main cause for
this
 is, they
can be involve
Suggestion
can involve
can be involved
 in bad company as they are young and they
donot
Suggestion
do not
 have that sense to find out who is right or bad for
them which
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them, which
 in result can lead to many problems which can even make their future
worse
the waging of armed conflict against an enemy
wars
.
Furthermore
, I would like to say these days parents even
donot
Suggestion
do not
 keep
eye
Suggestion
an eye
 on
ther
of them or themselves
their
the
 child what they are doing out of
home
 and even parents are careless about their child. Society and individual can be
effected
acted upon; influenced
affected
 as they can indulge in different types of drugs which in turn result into bad health and condition.
Moreover these
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Moreover, these
 days youngsters
donot
Suggestion
do not
 even like to discuss or take their decision as our elders say. To conclude, one must spend some quality
time
 at
home
 and can differentiate between right and wrong.
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