Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Learning from online courses to get qualifications is now becoming more and more common for young people and it is
also
approved by most universities and colleges.Going to the classrooms to listen to the teachers’ class seems untoward and
ueseless
having no beneficial use or incapable of functioning usefully
useless
compared with the former so that I think it will wear on. Distance learning
also have
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also has
its negative aspects.Without
excellent regulatory system
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an excellent regulatory system
excellent regulatory systems
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students can have more chances to cheat online
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so the honesty
can not
can not
cannot
be
guranteed
give surety or assume responsibility
guaranteed
granted
.
This
may cause the qualifications make no sense
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and perhaps almost everyone can finish the university studies.
This
is the most significant and fundamental problem.
Also
by distance learning
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teachers can not effectively inspect the students' course progress
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or give them some useful and essential guidance and encouragement.Students
also
are very confused by their problems which are unable to be solved. If they have questions
on
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about
the course
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it may have a great influence on the following studying contents
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But I think the strong points are overweight the weak points.Online courses means that students can study at home
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and can save much time that used to be wasted in traffic.It is
also
more convenient
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,
because the time for study is more flexible and even can be anytime at
anyplace
.A survey shows that people spend more than one hour on the way to school or office on average nowadays
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so studying on the Internet is undoubted a available solution.
This
way can
also
save money.A teacher may
teaching
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teach
thousands of students at the same time
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so everyone only needs to afford a little money.More people are
accessible
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more accessible
to
farther
to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)
further
further further
education than before. In conclusion
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distance learning is a huge reform and progress in the field of education.I think
this
trend will keep on developing and become more and more excellent. Maybe one day there will not be any schools.
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