Nowadays people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have had a huge negative impact on both individual and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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These days social networking trend has become important and necessary part in our

life

. Some believe

social connection

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the social connection

have

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has

has had

great negative impact

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a great negative impact

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our society while

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

disgree

be of different opinions

disagree

. I will discuss both

point

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points

of view

postive

characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.

positive

as well as negative.

Firstly

, I would like to say

this

Nowadays our

life

has become difficult without social

networking as

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networking, as

it is the easiest way to

cantact

close interaction

contact

contract

any person.

Secondly

, I would say it is used in almost every field like offices, schools, hospital and many other

type

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types

of works.It has many positive aspects.

For instance

, it

has make

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has made

our

life

easier and we can

accquire

come into the possession of something concrete or abstract

acquire

acquired

much knowledge through social connectivity sites.

Additionally

, there is so much learn and which can improve our communication skills and get to know more about people, their lives and

whats

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what's

happening around the world and it can be extremely useful. Coming to its negative side, If we

use

it for wrong

purpose it

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purpose, it

has

negative imapct

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a negative impact

negative impact

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our

life

For example

, if we

use

these sites to make one

life

’s in danger. To conclude, we should

use

these sites to

accquire

come into the possession of something concrete or abstract

acquire

knowledge or to learn

something but

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something, but

to avoid

negative

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the negative use, which

the negative use which

use

which is used for

wrong purpose

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the wrong purpose

wrong purposes

to make others

life

in danger.

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