Nowadays people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have had a huge negative impact on both individual and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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These days social networking trend has become important and necessary part in our

life

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. Some believe

social connection

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the social connection

have

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has

has had

great negative impact

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a great negative impact

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our society while

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

disgree

be of different opinions

disagree

. I will discuss both

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points

of view

postive

characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.

positive

as well as negative.

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, I would like to say

this

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Nowadays our

life

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has become difficult without social

networking as

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networking, as

it is the easiest way to

cantact

close interaction

contact

contract

any person.

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, I would say it is used in almost every field like offices, schools, hospital and many other

type

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types

of works.It has many positive aspects.

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, it

has make

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has made

our

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easier and we can

accquire

come into the possession of something concrete or abstract

acquire

acquired

much knowledge through social connectivity sites.

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, there is so much learn and which can improve our communication skills and get to know more about people, their lives and

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what's

happening around the world and it can be extremely useful. Coming to its negative side, If we

use

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it for wrong

purpose it

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purpose, it

has

negative imapct

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a negative impact

negative impact

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our

life

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, if we

use

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these sites to make one

life

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’s in danger. To conclude, we should

use

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these sites to

accquire

come into the possession of something concrete or abstract

acquire

knowledge or to learn

something but

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something, but

to avoid

negative

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the negative use, which

the negative use which

use

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which is used for

wrong purpose

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the wrong purpose

wrong purposes

to make others

life

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in danger.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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4 paragraphs

206 words

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Nowadays people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have had a huge negative impact on both individual and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many parts of the world, children's were very different from today. What do you think weather adventages or disadventages of life for children in the past?

Write a letter to a city planning manager about demolition of a historical building in your area and say – Explain why it shouldn’t be demolished. – Suggest a future use for this building. – Recommend a way to raise money for repairs.

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Students are becoming more and more reliant on the internet. While the internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement ?