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Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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I am writing to express my disappointment with the meal that we had at the flower drum restaurant, Adayar branch,
last
 Saturday. My family had accompanied me at
this
 food joint. We were there to celebrate my recent promotion by my employer. I have heard good reviews about
this
 place from my friend and colleagues, so I thought of giving a try. But it really spoilt our mood. My wife is more health conscious, so she preferred to eat seafood. We have ordered the exquisite seafood platter. Unfortunately the fish and prawn served on the platter was not fresh,
furthermore
, they have added too much of spices (chilli powder) which made it unsuitable for kids. I urge you to please check on the hygiene and warn your chef to be careful with the food
that is
 served. I request you to take action on the inconvenience that has caused us. I hope you will take necessary action to ensure good health of your customers.

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    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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