Some people say that parents have more important roles to play in children development.However, others argue that friends and television have the most significant influence. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Children, since their birth, are always in learning mode. Either from their parents or from their surroundings,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

.e.

friends

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Friends

, television, society at large. As children are young, they will observe and follow their parents at

early

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an early stage

stage

and

then

will learn from their playmates and classmates in their early years. At early

stage

, parents will be their primary

soruce

the place where something begins, where it springs into being

source

of contact and

thus

will guide them through basic

life

skills. They will be

primary soruce

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the primary source

primary source

a primary source

of education in early

stage

development basic

Accept comma addition

development, basic

commuication

the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information

communication

skills which would have long lasting effect and

thus

play an important role. Initial activities like crawl, walk, speech and other basic actions are mostly influenced by parents. As the time passes and

childern

a young person of either sex

children

are introduced to the

playgroups

and

then

school, they will have an added

development

source in

form

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the form

of their playmates and classmates. They will

then

begin the

next

stage

of learning, which would be more social and educational in nature and

thus

, shape their

life

in society and field of formal learning. As the ally-in-class helps a child with any specific

challange

take exception to

challenge

in

study

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the study

, T.V.

in

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In

a regulated environment, serves as an ally-at-home, helps child to know better of unknown world. As seen above, both the sources are somewhat

improtant

of great significance or value

important

than the other at some point of the children's

life

. One without the

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

, in a required degree of influence, would not be helpful for overall

development

of children.

Thus

, in my opinion, I would say, both parents as well as friends and television are important for a

mulit

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multi

-

faciet

acting or moving or capable of acting or moving quickly

fast

development

of

kid's

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a kid's life

the kid's life

life

. And as,

development

is a never ending process, both would be required in relevant proportions at each

life

stage

of

development

of the child.