Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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health
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. I personally believe that increasing the amount of sport facilities can only do a limited influence on public Use synonyms
health
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of all, doing sport are positively related to our Linking Words
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life
can make a win-win situation for our Use synonyms
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, there are still some measures play an important role in our Linking Words
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also
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health
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, there might be new index that could tell the status of our Linking Words
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.
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health
. We should not just focus on one Use synonyms
measure but
should have another solution to it. By doing so, we can make a great progress in public Accept comma addition
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite