You are coming home late night and detained by police Department for a routine check(patrol). The officer on duty behaved with you rudely. Escalte the complaint to police Commissioner about this incident. In your letter Introduce yourself describe what happened say what you want police Commissinoer to do for you.

Dear Police Commissioner, I am writing
this
letter to express a bitter experience of police misconduct that I suffered yesterday. My name is Peter and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
live at 9 Oland Crescent, Halifax NS B4S 1C8.
Last
night, I was coming home after attending a late night party, and at Palace street corner, I was warned to stop the
car
. Immediately, I pulled over the
car
and cooperated with the
officer
. The
officer
demanded my license and vehicle registration. I complied with his demand.
Thereafter
, I was asked to step out of my
car
for interrogation at which I was totally surprised. The
officer
came close to me and said, "you are drunk, buddy". As I was not sloshed, I challenged his judgement. Without a breathalyser, he decided to confirm it by smelling my mouth.
This
was disgusting and against the law. The
officer
's name was Philip and his white Dodge
car's
Suggestion
car
registration plate reads 'AYAZ113'.
This
is a sheer misconduct and
this
officer
must be penalized for his acts. I request you to take appropriate action against him. I hope to hear from you on
this
matter and my email address is [email protected] Sincerely yours, Peter
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