Some parents believe that learning mathematics at schools is redundant and should not be taught while others believe that it should remain a foundational subject whether or not it is used in later life. Discuss both sides.

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The line graph gives information about the amounts of fish and different types of meat namely chicken, beef and lamb consumed in a European country over a period of 15 years.
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fish consumption was lower than others throughout the period shown.
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for chicken increased dramatically between 1979 and 2004. In 1979, the amount of lamb was exactly 150
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per person per week, but
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significantly to about 75
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half of the
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in 1979. In
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of beef,
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in 1979 was about 220
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it fluctuated before falling by around 100
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in the rest of the period. Turning to the remaining categories, we can see that the amount of fish eaten dropped slightly to roughly 50
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in 2004.
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for chicken followed the opposite trend, it
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sharply and
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reached its peak of about 260
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in 2004, which was the highest point in the graph.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • redundant
  • foundational
  • practically useful
  • complex mathematical theories
  • life skills
  • vocational training
  • critical thinking
  • problem-solving skills
  • cognitive abilities
  • rapid advancement
  • technology and science
  • mathematical principles
  • digital age
  • practical, technology-oriented education
  • informed decision-making
  • financial planning
  • budgeting
  • understanding risks
  • sense of discipline
  • achievement
  • perseverance
  • persistence
  • attention to detail
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