These days many children spend a lot of their time playing computer games but little time doing sports. why is this? Is this a negative or positive development?
It is generally claimed that technological advancement has affected the lives of all age groups.
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it is observed that it has Accept space
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major impact
on youngsters and children because they spend Suggestion
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majority
of time in playing Suggestion
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instead
of outdoor games. In my opinion, Linking Words
this
is a negative development as it can affect the mental and physical health of children.
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due to overpopulation and increase in urbanizationAccept space
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most of the areas are used for making homes and apartments due to which children do not have enough place to play. Accept space
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, due to increase in crime activity related to Linking Words
children parents
do not allow their children to play outside. Accept comma addition
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, a recent news revealed that there are Linking Words
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of people who lure kids along with them and sell their internal parts due to Suggestion
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groups
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type of activities in the society and parents are concerned about their children. Due to Linking Words
this
reasons children are forced to play Linking Words
computer
games by staying at home.
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On the other hand
, excessive use of Linking Words
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computer
can cause scores of problems in the children. Suggestion
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a computer
the computer
Firstly
, playing games for long hours or Linking Words
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computer
screen can lead to problems like loss Use synonyms
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eye sight. Suggestion
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it can Accept space
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also
result poor grades in schools. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the excessive sitting and lack of physical activity can result in serious medical illness Linking Words
such
as obesity due to the inactivity caused by extreme usage of Linking Words
computer
games. Use synonyms
In addition
, the more involvement in indoor games decreases the thinking capacity and learning capabilities.
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computer
games are a source of entertainment for Use synonyms
children but
it has Accept comma addition
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bad impact
on physical and mental health. Suggestion
a bad impact
bad impacts
Therefore
, it is believed that over use of technical gadgets can have adverse effects on overall growth and development of the children.Linking Words
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