The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart compares the expenditure on different
consumer
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goods
by the people of four European countries; namely Britain, France, Italy and Germany. At the first glance, Use synonyms
British
spent more money on Correct article usage
the British
consumer
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goods
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while
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Germans
spent the least.
It is worth noticing that, Correct article usage
the Germans
British
spent more than 170 Correct article usage
the British
thousand
pound sterling Use synonyms
for
photographic Change preposition
on
films
which is the highest amount spent on any Use synonyms
consumer
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goods
. British Use synonyms
also
spent more than 160 Linking Words
thousand
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for
purchasing Change preposition
on
Toys
and CDs, which is higher than that of Use synonyms
by
any other nation. For perfumes, tennis racquets and Change preposition
apply
personal
they spent more than other nations as well. Replace the word
personnel
On the other hand
, French people spent around 165 Linking Words
thousand
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for
purchasing photographic Change preposition
on
films
, which makes it the highest amount they spent on Use synonyms
consumer
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goods
.
French citizens spent about 158 Use synonyms
thousand
on Use synonyms
toys
which is a tie with Italians. For photographic Use synonyms
films
, Use synonyms
toys
and CDs, their spending totalled Use synonyms
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second
highest among the given four nations. Correct article usage
the second
Finally
, they spent less than 150 Linking Words
thousand
on remaining Use synonyms
consumer
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goods
.
Italian citizens spent around 150 Use synonyms
thousand
on personal stereos, tennis racquets and CDs Use synonyms
while
they spent about 5 Linking Words
thousand
more on photographic Use synonyms
films
and Use synonyms
toys
. Use synonyms
Finally
, Germans spent Linking Words
the
fewer amount Correct article usage
a
in
all Change preposition
on
consumer
items than any other nation and their average spending was 145 Use synonyms
thousand
.Use synonyms
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