Many people have health problems just because they lead unhealthy lifestyle. what are the reasons and possible solutions?
In
this
current world, many people are suffering with several personal health
issues like obesity and heart problems due to eating junk food and don't do the regular excercise
, to overcome the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
this issues
they have a several solutions. In Suggestion
this issue
these issues
this
essay will discuss about reasons
and solutions for the issue.
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the reasons
Firstly
, in the globalization era young generation are working
in different time zones Suggestion
is working
hence
they don't have get calender to eat, therefore
they are eating ready made junk meal like pizza, burger and pastas due to they don't have calender to prepare home snack. Because of consuming these
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this
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of the citizens are effected to several fitness problems. Accept comma addition
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items most
Secondly
, due to busy work schedules many
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schedules, many
emloyees
are not doing any regular a worker who is hired to perform a job
employees
excercise
and always travelling to motor the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
vechiele
, a conveyance that transports people or objects
vehicle
this
is also
one cause to
getting many fitness problems. Suggestion
of
For Example
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% of people are suffering with obesity and Accept comma addition
world, 40
helath
issue due to eating unhealthy feed and no a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
health
physcial
activity for involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
body
.
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the body
On the other hand
, to overcome of these health
problems everyone should change their lifestyle like to aviod
eating outside bread and give importance to home cuisine, everyone should spare some hour stay clear from; keep away from; keep out of the way of someone or something
avoid
to
them to prepare Suggestion
for
health menu
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a healthy menu
healthy menu
theirfore
they can (used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
therefore
therefor
aviod
many issues. On the top of that need to do the regular stay clear from; keep away from; keep out of the way of someone or something
avoid
excercise
like walking and yoga the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
therefore
body will fit and avoid many health
realted
being connected either logically or causally or by shared characteristics
related
issue
and Suggestion
issues
same moment
for small distance travel everyone should go by cycling or walking henceforth they can save to money and getting good Suggestion
the same moment
health
.
In Conclusion, in this
generation many people are facing
with several Suggestion
are faced
health
problems like increase the body and heart problem due to eating unhealth
meat and no proper workouts to overcome of not in or exhibiting good health in body or mind
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this
things eat healthy bite
like Suggestion
a healthy bite
home made
eats with many proteins and to do the daily workout like walking, running and play any sports.made or produced in the home or by yourself
homemade
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