In modern society, many people think primary school should teach science and technology rather than history and geography which are useless and boring. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some of the children are pretty easy to get angry easily if mothers forgotten to feed them on
time
. Others may feel pretty calm and alert mothers quietly. Is our characteristics born with
have much Suggestion
to
influence
on our personality
? Or the experiences we may have in our life
have more influence
on it? In this
essay, I am going to discuss both cases.
There is a Chinese proverb that says "I can predict what you are doing in eighty when you are three year-old". People believe our personality
are mainly affected
by our characteristics, which we are naturally born with. Some people are trying really hard to get everything perfect, they would like to get everything done in a hundred percent, without any single error. They are the perfectionist. Others might be pretty happy with things just done eighty percent, as they accept things cannot be perfect and they Suggestion
has mainly affected
are satisfy
what have been done. We can see these kind of personalities on children, and if you are a perfectionist when you are a child, you are normally a perfectionist when you are an adult.
Suggestion
are satisfying
are satisfied
have satisfied
However
, others might argue that events that we experiences
in our Suggestion
experience
life
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
time
influence
our personality
. I believe things happen in our life
might affect our personality
, but it is only limited to really big events. I might be easily annoyed by people arriving work
late. Even though, I know there are various reasons, that late cannot be prevented. I still will get annoyed no matter what the truth is. Lateness annoys me, no matter what. While I have Suggestion
arriving to work
also
seen people was annoyed by lateness, until one day, he understand
he is going to dead soon, and he understands there are things more important than being on Suggestion
understands
time
. So big events in life
does
Suggestion
do
influence
people, but it limits to some really rare case only.
I have discussed if our personality
are
what we born with, or can easily influenced by the events we experienced in our Suggestion
is
life
the period during which something is functional (as between birth and death)
lifetime
time
. My point of view is that, our personality
are mainly sharped
by the characteristics we are born with. Events happened in our Suggestion
is mainly shaped
are mainly shaped
life
time
might influence
our personally, but it
only limited to events that really have a big impact in our it is
it's
life
, such
as, a car accident, or recover from a
almost dead experiences.Suggestion
an
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