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Findings show that many criminals have low level of education. Some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate criminals in prisons so that they can get job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Criminals are usually considered with low level of
education
. Some people believe that providing
education
 to criminals in prisons can equip them with essential skills to get an offer,
hence
, it is the best solution to lower the crime rate. In my opinion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 slightly disagree with the statement as
this
 is only applicable to those low-skill criminals. For those smart, highly educated
psycopath
someone with a sociopathic personality; a person with an antisocial personality disorder ('psychopath' was once widely used but has now been superseded by 'sociopath')
psychopath
,
this
 would not be useful. It is no doubt that some people commit crimes as they are poor and do not have a stable job to earn a living. Reported
on
Suggestion
in
 the newspaper, we can easily find an article about the offender felt guilty for what he did,
however
, he had no other options at that time because he had no money.
Education
 can surely prevent
this
 type of tragedies from happening again as it
provide
Suggestion
provides
 knowledges and specific
technics
a practical method or art applied to some particular task
technique
 for them to find a job.
Although
education
 seems able to tackle the issue, it is just for a specific group of criminals. People who with mental illness, or those with
high
Suggestion
a high education background
education
 background would not be benefited. Personally, I think the only effective way to stop them from committing crime is solve their real problem behind. Understand what triggers their anger and turn their execution plan in real life.
To
Suggestion
In
 conclusion, it is undeniable that a
hugh
greater than normal in degree or intensity or amount
high
higher
huge
 percentage of criminals are with low
education
 level and with better knowledges and skills,
crime rate
Suggestion
the crime rate
 can be reduced.
Nevertheless
, understand their issues should be in the
first
 priority in my eyes.

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