In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work.

Needs and demands

for

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of

many families are growing and

thus

in many

families

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families, both

both

the parents go out for

work

. With growing competition in the world,

parent's goal

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the parent's goal

is to give best to

thier

of them or themselves

their

there

three

children and to do

this

both

parents

work

hard to earn enough money.

However

, children sometimes feel alone because there is no one in the house to talk to

them but

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them, but

on the other

hand many

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hand, many

children think that it is a benefit for the family as there is an additional income. If we look at

the brighter

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the bright

side of the topic, as mentioned

above there

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above, there

is

addition

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the addition

an addition

of extra income in the family. As the world

is growing

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grows

,

cost

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the cost

of living is becoming more expensive as people are trying to get

more luxurious life

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a more luxurious life

for themselves.

Thus

, if

both

the parents

work

, they can not only invest more

on

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in

children's education but

also

help them to go to extra-curricular activities.

Although

there are lots of benefits, there are some disadvantages too. As we all know when

both

the parents are working, the child has to stay alone as nowadays most of the families are nuclear and there is no one to help them out with their homework or help them to tackle with their problems. The main concern that parents should take into consideration is that, since

no

in the historical present; at this point in the narration of a series of past events

now

is there to guide them there is a possibility wherein their children may choose

wrong path

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the wrong path

.

For example

, many children bunk their schools or colleges as there is no one to look after them. From

this

above

discussion it

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discussion, it

be concluded that, in order to

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

child's necessary

requirements

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requirements, both

both

the parents have to

work

. In my opinion,

both

child and parents should come together and try to spend maximum time with each other during holidays or during weekends. The main responsibility is

of

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on

about

the parents, that they should not get too much involved in their

work

and give enough of their time to

children

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the children

.