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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

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Today, English is considered the most superior
language
 in any part of the country. It is the only
language
, which is taught along with the local
language
. People give their most of the time in learning the English
language
. If our priority would be only learning English, there is a chance that we could forget our native
language
. Our local
language
 is a gift given by our ancestors and the
government
 should increase awareness among the society so that our
language
 does not get disappeared.
First
, earlier people used to use their native
language
 in a conversation and they lived a really long and happy life. They were mentally strong and physically well developed. Even today some countries like China and Japan do not use English anywhere and they are among the most developed countries in the world. So,
Instead
 of focussing more on a
language
, we should give our efforts to learn Science, Technology for the development of our country.
Second
, the
government
 could play a major role to make people realise that we should not be ashamed of learning our local
language
 because every
language
 is just a medium to have a conversation, developed by our ancestors. If someone is comfortable in speaking in a
language
, he should not give their unnecessary efforts to learn some other
language
. In Japan their
government
 took
this
 initiative that they will persist with their native
language
 and would concentrate on the development of the country and we can see that Japan is leading in Technology. In conclusion,
Although
 it is not right to completely remove English from our life as it could be useful at somewhere, we should
also
 feel fortunate to our
language
. Involvement of the
government
 would make
this
 easier that people would accept their mother tongue
language
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global communication
  • economic opportunities
  • cultural diversity
  • endangered
  • linguistic heritage
  • inclusive
  • multilingualism
  • language revitalization
  • language policy
  • language preservation
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