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do you agree or dis agree with the following statement "a person should never make an important decision alone use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Personally, I believe that, good decision born from discussing with others, so that I totally disagree with building a major judgment by yourself. Generally, a person who makes a resolution only focus on their own views, in the same way, what are the benefits will be coming from that,
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 They never consider about disadvantages, which will affect on other people. Human mind always thinking about their self, not a common way so which, trend affected to finding solutions in a critical situation. Before taking a judgment
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 if we discuss with others, from that we can get ideas in multiple views, which will help to analyse the selection, how will affect on me and others. 0bsess on the matter in our brain, It will cause serious issue on our health and mental. Discussing with others will produce to relief pain in our mind.
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 If you find a solution for your family problem, better to discuss with your family and friends which will use full to analyse the problem. Office friends and employees will give the best idea of a getting a ruling on your office issue.
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The president should discuss with their minister to make a new resolution for their country
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 It will affect on every single person who, living in that country. It strikes me that, best judgment will take from non identical ideas which will deliver from consulting others. It may help to prevent future problems and getting support from others.

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