some people said that it is responsibility of government of developing countries to provide basic amenities such as education health give your opinion
people
elect the Suggestion
The people
People
governmet
for providing different comforts at low cost. the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
,
its prime duty of Accept space
,
government
to provide basic amenities to citizens
that includes health Suggestion
the citizens
education clothing
food and shelter. Suggestion
education, clothing
however
, some people Suggestion
However
belive
that the governing body of accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
believes
developed
countries should help developing countries to mitigate these Suggestion
developing
isses
rapidly, I prepare and issue for public distribution or sale
issues
however
agree with former view
, there are number argument to support my opinion.t
Suggestion
the former view
firstly
Accept comma addition
Firstly, Government
Firstly Government
Government
should make primary education compulsory as result people become more litrate they
can enhance their standard of living by Accept comma addition
literate, they
literate they
earing
the act of consuming food
eating
sufficent amount
of money. Suggestion
a sufficient amount
sufficient amount
sufficient amounts
this
leads to crime free society Suggestion
This
for
instance in
many countries primary education is free because of that Accept comma addition
instance, in
theyhave
higher literacy rates.
Suggestion
they have
secondly
, Suggestion
Secondly
every one
knows that health is wealth.all people
everyone
if
people Suggestion
If
is
healthy Suggestion
are
are being
enough they
can concentrate more on their Accept comma addition
enough, they
study
as well as workSuggestion
studies
,
Accept space
,
government
should provide primary aid at free of cost or at minimum cost. Suggestion
the government
they
should Suggestion
They
also
encourage people to follow healthy diet
and make Suggestion
a healthy diet
their
houses clearer from objective case of they
them
stagnent
water as they are the source of different not circulating or flowing
stagnant
dieses
.
a piece of dishware normally used as a container for holding or serving food
dishes
doses
diesels
to
add to Suggestion
To
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
government
also
develop trade relations with other developed countries ,
Accept space
,
this
would possibally
encourage by chance
possibly
developed
countries to invest in different field of developing countries. Suggestion
developing
many
of Suggestion
Many
mnc
companies now opening their subbranches
into
developing countries as Suggestion
in
result they
can get Suggestion
a result, they
a result they
workes
at lower salaries. Suggestion
work
works
workers
worked
this
would Suggestion
This
definatly
solve without question and beyond doubt
definitely
unemployment problem
in developing countries, so at the end Suggestion
the unemployment problem
unemployment problems
this
is win win situation for both.
in
the conclusion, Suggestion
In
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
belive
that it is essential for accept as true; take to be true
believe
believes
believed
government
to provide their citizens basic amenities
Accept comma addition
amenities, however
however
at some extent help for developed countries are also
requird
..necessary for relief or supply
required
recorded
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