Question:Everybody should be allowed admission to University study program regardless of their level of Academic activity.To what extent do you agree or disagree.Give reason for your answer including relevant example from your own knowledge or experience

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District Nurse District Nursing Centre Lake Park 12 September 2019 Re:
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Andrew O'
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, 74-year-old Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in
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to
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O'
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who suffered from
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accident which resulted
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right-sided paralysis. He will be discharged in 3 days. He requires your continued management. During hospitalization, he underwent
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intensive physiotherapy and occupational therapy, but yielded slow progress and still needs aid with grooming, hygiene and getting in and out of
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bed.
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, he can eat by himself and ambulates slowly with the use of
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. In view of his present condition, the family were advised
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home placement but refused. After
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assessment by an OT, modifications were made which
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of bed rails and
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in
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and toilet. With regards to his social history,
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lives with his 71-year-old wife,Mary who has been diagnosed with angina. Their children were married and
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not live nearby. For the continuity of care, it would be greatly appreciated if you could arrange
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nurse to visit his house twice daily to help him with mobilization, bathing and grooming.
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, kindly monitor his medications and
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how he copes at home,
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his wife's health. Please note that
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will need to attend day hospital three times a week. Details of his medications
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will be forwarded. If necessary, kindly re-refer him back to our hospital. If you have
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questions, please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours faithfully, Charge Nurse
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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