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Goal of making a film is to boost the educational system. Agree or disagree.

#film #system
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Entertainment industry
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The entertainment industry
 is vast and composed of myriad fragments. Movies play a major part in the field of entertainment, but all films are educational is a debatable topic. Some might contend that films can improve the quality of education by providing essential information on disparate topics, while one can't deny the negative impact some movies can have on individuals, and
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 not all movies are made with the intention of educating people. I believe that the ultimate aim of shooting a film
is entertainment more
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is more entertainment
 than education.
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, infotainment industry
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 as National Geographic, History Channel and so on so forth can enlighten
pupil
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
 on various subjects from
wild
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
life
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 to marine
life
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, to the primitive
life
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 of the inhabitants of Amazonian jungles, while cinemas showing sci-fi, fiction and thrillers are all meant to entertain the imagination of people and have nothing do with teaching them a moral or a
life
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 lesson. What people choose to watch
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 plays a part in what are they trying to gain by watching a particular film.
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, schools and
universtities
the body of faculty and students at a university
universities
 are very selective when choosing a film to show to their students,
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, the students can
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 opt to entertain themselves with something
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 not educational. In conclusion, movies are only made for the purpose of visual
entertainment but
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entertainment, but
 some can
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 prove to be quite informative on different social subjects.

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