Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the enviroment so it must be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people contend economic development is the sole solution to eliminate
food
crisis, while others say economic
prosperty
an economic state of growth with rising profits and full employment
prosperity
property
is destroying the surroundings so it must be deterred. I totally agree with the
first
view. There are a number of reasons why economic growth harms the
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
.
First
, due to the expansion of business, material sources
are disproportionately harnessed
Suggestion
is disproportionately harnessed
in order to meet people’s demands and life’s quality. In fact, the depletion of natural resources
such
as forests, fuels and minerals, leads to those’s exhausting and compromises the sustainability of the surrounding
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
in the long run.
Second
, since plants are in full operation, the byproducts of
production process
Suggestion
the production process
will multiply.
As a result
, a staggering volume of chemical wastes discharged into the surroundings and causes many global issues,
such
as air, water and soil pollution.
On the other hand
, it is believed that a healthy economy puts an end to financial distress and
food crisis
Suggestion
the food crisis
.
First
, if the agricultural sector thrives,
food
supplies will abound.
This
means
food
crisis is addressed,
eliminnating
terminate, end, or take out
eliminating
the worst-case hunger scenario.
Second
, industrial activities significantly generate job opportunities, which lifts those in need out of the tough times, especially their unemployments.
For instance
, burgeoning textile industries employ millions of workers and offer them a living wage. In
conclusion economic
Accept comma addition
conclusion, economic
prosperty
an economic state of growth with rising profits and full employment
prosperity
property
plays an important role in preventing hunger and
poverrty
the state of having little or no money and few or no material possessions
poverty
. It must not be stopped despite to its negative
enviromental
of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings
environmental
implications.
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