In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyle of children are different from those of previous generations. Some people say this has had a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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eople

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People

and children are adapting to these changes in the environment.

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the eating habits and lifestyle of children has drastically changed when we compare with those of previous generations. I completely agree that

this

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change has created a negative effect on their health, at the same time, let us discuss the changes and its effect on children. N

ow a days,

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Nowadays

children are more prone to or love eating junk foods which are sold in restaurants and road sides. The foods sold are very u

nhygienic

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which will lead to stomach sickness and sometimes leads to food poisoning.

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, these types of foods are low in nutrition, high in fat and c

alories which

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calories, which

creates obesity and malnutrition in the early age. In the past, parents do not encourage children to eat in hotels. They are aware of the consequences behind it.

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ence they

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Hence, they

prepare good nutrition filled dishes at home for their children to stay healthy.

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, the way of living and addiction to modern technology has created h

uge effect

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a huge effect

the huge effect

on children. Technologies like computer games and video games has influenced children to spend l

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a lot

lots

of time in gaming. Because of these children are not engaged in physical activities and

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likely to develop eye problems and backache due to poor posture. But, when we look at the past, children were spending more time on sports and cultural activities like dancing, singing and playing which made them very fit and could get more involved with their n

eighbors

a person who lives (or is located) near another

neighbours

and society. All in all, though people develop the habit of eating outside and playing computer games which is creating a bad future which cannot be changed completely. Parents should take necessary measure to advise and encourage their children to participate in o

ut door

located, suited for, or taking place in the open air

outdoor

activities and eat healthy foods like fresh fruits and vegetables.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyle of children are different from those of previous generations. Some people say this has had a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Levels of depression and antisocial behavior in children have increased dramatically in modern societies. This situation has led many people to believe that childhood itself is in crisis. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interesting in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

You have just bought a video game console which does not work well. write a letter to the ventor. say what is wrong with this piece of electronics. say what you have done to address this issue. find out if you could have it replaced.