To be labelled a ‘Work of Art’, a painting, sculpture or other art form should display certain qualities that are unique. However, over the past century there has been a decline in the quality of prize-winning artwork and it is now possible for quite ordinary pieces of art to be labelled ‘masterpieces ’ whilst true works of art pass unnoticed. Do you agree or disagree?

There has been a
change
in the expectation of every possible creature living on the Earth. Amongst them, there is
also
the presence of the lovers of
Art
.
Since
Suggestion
For
the past ten decades, there has been a shift in the preferences of the lovers of
Art
. It may,
however
, be
also
a possibility that there is
dearth
Suggestion
a dearth
of ‘True Lovers’ of the
art
in the current era. Whatever may be the case, it is the
art
which is always at the receiving end and has, to a large extent, lost its renowned charm. A
work
of
art
is a masterpiece which gets conceived in the mind of an intellectual who ultimately gives birth to it on a canvas. For an artist (read any artist), his/her child (read piece of
art
) is
more dearer
Suggestion
dearer
more dear
than
the fine
Suggestion
the finest
opals, more precious than the Emeralds!
However
, from amongst numerous
such
pieces of artwork there are very few, lucky pieces, which outshines/eclipses other
art
photographs or other visual representations in a printed publication
artwork
work
due to their sheer uniqueness,
adorability
Suggestion
durability
durable
,
attractiveness
Suggestion
attractive
and eye catching features, to name a few. In the yesteryears, there used to be a very negligible number of
such
masterpieces. With the wind of the
change
, which engulfed the whole
society including
Accept comma addition
society, including
the intellectuals and their subjects, there has been a tremendous shifting of expectations, preferences, requirements and ‘true love’ towards the
work
of
art
. It is due to
this
change
which has happened due to more materialistic needs that the population of
art
lovers and the quality of
art
work
has greatly declined. The direct, and unfortunate,
effect
Suggestion
the effect
of
such
a
change
has influenced the quality of
art
work
negatively. Due to the paucity of
art
lovers and their genuine and matured followers, it has become a possibility for even a substandard piece of
art
to be categorized as a ‘masterpiece’, whereas the true works of arts remain a mute spectator. In a recent article published in the ‘
Art
and Culture’ section of a leading fortnight magazine, there has been a full article dedicated in memory of the maestro of
art
work
, the Late Mr. ABC. It was unfortunate to learn that the maestro had to spend his
last
few years in misery.
This
in spite of the fact, that the said maestro was a well known international figure in the era of
1950s
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the 1950s
in the field of arts, particularly the painting. It can safely and with relevant evidences concluded that the kind of intellectual pieces in respect of
art
which are
labeled
bearing or marked with a label or tag
labelled
as masterpieces in the current era stands nowhere in comparison and contrast to the real masterpieces of
art
which were produced over the past hundred odd years.
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