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Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others. Do you agree or disagree?

#television #free-time #people
In
this
 globalization era human life is occupied with many things
,
Accept space
,
but most of the
time
 they engage with television due to entertainment and games
hence
 automatically it's led to not touch with other people
.
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.
 I have completely agreed with the statement that now a days people are busy with
digitial
displaying numbers rather than scale positions
digital
 network.
Firstly
, online streaming is playing
most importent role
Suggestion
the most important role
most important role
 and providing many things with
minium
the least possible
minimum
minimal
 cost like international movies, several TV shows in finger tips
hence
 everyone
intersted
having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
entrusted
 to watch
this
 kind programs
therefore
 automatically life is leading to lazy because most of the
time
 is sitting and watching due to no personal health awareness.
For Example
 As per
latest CNN survey
Suggestion
the latest CNN survey
 digital streaming viewers almost 70% increased in past 2 years because in the hand watching many things and with less cost.
Secondly
, same
time many
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time, many
 young stars are
continuesly
at every point
continuously
continually
 playing with games in wide
screen
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screen, then
then
 they are
avioding
stay clear from; keep away from; keep out of the way of someone or something
avoiding
abiding
 to meet close friends and family members, it's causes to missing their personal life and missing many things henceforth it's
cascusing
 many health issues to
continusly
Suggestion
continue
continuously
 playing
.
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.
For Instance
 as per
latest survey
Suggestion
the latest survey
 by world health organization, in the
world 30
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world, 30
% college students are suffering with eye and
obisicty
more than average fatness
obesity
 issue due to they are
continuesly
at every point
continuously
continually
playying
the act of playing a musical instrument
playing
 different kind of games and it's lead to illness. In Conclusion, I have
completly
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
agree
Suggestion
agreed
 that
televions
broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects
televisions
telephones
 are taking backward to several people due to many people are almost forget to meet others and same
time
 facing several body issues like eye due to
contisuly
Suggestion
continue
continuously
 playing with online games.
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