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Some say that rich countries should help poor countries with food and education. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience.

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Some people claim that developed nations should support undeveloped ones in terms of
food
 and education. I mostly agree with
this
 statement, because it has some benefits for rich countries
such
 as young and educated
man power
the force of workers available
manpower
 and they have excessive
food
 sources and teaching experiences to give the
third
 world without difficultly.
Firstly
, most developed countries, even small ones,
have
Suggestion
has
 huge agricultural production and massive
food
 supplies. Because,
food
 production can increase with technology.
Secondly
, rich nations have a great educational experience from the
first
 school to universities.
Therefore
, they can support teaching systems of
the poor
Suggestion
poorer
 countries. I think the main benefit of
this
 help will be educated people in that country. When they solve the
nutrion
(physiology) the organic process of nourishing or being nourished; the processes by which an organism assimilates food and uses it for growth and maintenance
nutrition
neutron
 issues and get a good education, developing countries can raise well-educated individuals. To conclude, I am not a dog.

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