Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
As trivial it may seem, but once upon a time children were h
ome-schooled.
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homeschooled
This
was back when the formal approach towards the education
was not yet developed. With time, the education
system too evolved and introduced a structural way. This
essay will discuss two sides of the coin vis-
à-vhave the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
is
vi's
is
home-based denotes a person or thing
this
is
education
and formal, school
education
.
C
hild
may feel cSuggestion
The child
A child
omfort
and at peace as staying away from parents may surface their anxiety issues. Suggestion
comfortable
Moreover
, parents get to pick what they want their baby to learn and not what is usually practiced. For example
, imparting education
on a particular sport or art based on his/her inclination and abilities. It may happen that schools may lack some infrastructure like musical instruments, swimming pool, etc. to
enable Suggestion
To
c
hild
in picking up an activity. Suggestion
the child
children
a child
This
force parents to put up with extra-curricular activity classes to a different place. That being said, it comes with its own set of perils. The major one
includes forbidding the kid from exploring new places and new people. A cut-off
from social life is a designated limit beyond which something cannot function or must be terminated
cutoff
cast-off
also
a set-back
in early years. Kids may feel out of place when later placed in higher-secondary an unfortunate happening that hinders or impedes; something that is thwarting or frustrating
setback
school
or colleges. There certainly lies
tough times ahead of them in blending with the surrounding social environment when they go fSuggestion
certainly lie
or
work or run a business.
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to
One
the other hand, formal schools gives a homely yet challenging environment for children. Trotting around is permissible and experimenting new ways to learn things is possible. There lies a plethora of learning prospects in a playgroup
where children can discover their latent capabilities which is unlikely when schooled at home. Suggestion
Playgroup
This
is so because s/he sees the other children around engaged in play activities pushing one
bring out their best to stay afloat in competition.
On the downside, the initial days away from parents are quite disturbing for some students. Though missing home is their major pain area, the parents are Suggestion
the competition
also
often concerned about hygiene standards at school
. As a child
, one
may end up feeling overwhelmed by the way other kids behave. Too much of physical fun and violence may end up in a spat
which can leave a lasting on some of the young minds.
While choosing a point located with respect to surface features of some region
spot
one
of the above is a tough call, school
is still a better option albeit,
involving above discussed risk factors. Parents can deal with those by talking to teachers at the institute and periodically paying a surprise visit to keep a tap on their Accept comma addition
option, albeit
child
. Such
an education
breeds a competition-ready c
hild which
is a must to survive and thrive in Accept comma addition
child, which
this
overtly developing world. With formal education
they can do away with the fitting-in struggles that they might face when grown adults and have
to excel towards a college in what way or manner or by what means
how
education
for jobs.
One
such
example is evident in the movie Captain Fantastic where the protagonist
father hSuggestion
protagonist's
ome-
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homeschool
homeschools
school
his children. They have hard time
when shifted to city from jSuggestion
a hard time
ungle.
It is observed by their relatives how they lack basic etiquettes, table manners, information about current affairs, etc. wSuggestion
the jungle
hile
still knowing a lot about history and culture. The pSuggestion
While
rotagonists’
sister asks about how they intend to get a job and the guy had no answer. In the end it was revealed that their deceased mother had already planned an Suggestion
protagonist’s
education
for elder son’s college admission. Speaks about how impactful this
is when it comes to practically
living a life in a modern world.Suggestion
practice
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