The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nuclear
power
provides cheap
energy
sources. Sometimes the present sources of
energy
like oil, gas
etc
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
will be finished. Augments in favour nuclear
power
. The nuclear
energy
produces by chemical materials. It is comparatively cheaper than other
energy
. To produce the
power
it only involves some expert people and
energy
plant. Some expert people and
energy
it needs large involvement like worker, machineries, etc. And
also
takes more time. The nuclear
power
plants are well protected and monitor.
That is
why there
is
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are
less possibilities. The threat of nuclear
power
maintains world peace because the developed Countries like
U
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you
us
.K. U.S.A. Canada
,
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,
France etc
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France, etc.
France etc.
have
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has
nuclear weapons
(
Accept space
(
warhead). Each country does not give threat to other countries, Because they know
ifone
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if one
country
distrub
move deeply
disturb
others,
then
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
will create problems
from
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for
them, so it is
wellbalanced
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well balanced
and world peace maintains peacefully. Though there are sometimes
creates
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created
problems
by
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with
the nuclear
technology but
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technology, but
sometimes it
also help
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also helps
has also helped
the mankind in the field of medical and engineering sectors. In the medical
field we
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field, we
can say nuclear ray sometimes we can treat a cancer patient.
On the other hand
in the field of engineering by the nuclear
power
engineering can do
lot
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lots
of things like
operate
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operating
engine
instead
of electricity.In Conclusion we can say though there are some problems in the nuclear
power but
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power, but
it has some benefit for the mankind.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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  • Mutually assured destruction
  • Greenhouse gases
  • Cost-effective
  • Radiation therapy
  • Proliferation
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