*QUESTION* There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family?
Do
to
globalization era, nowadays many people are interested to stay with small family like husband, wife and kids rather than large family for their personal conveyance, they are several advantages of Suggestion
with
this
, but same time worth to discuss disadvantages also
.
Firstly
, In this
current generation everyone is interested in micro families due to their personal space engaged with their partner and take their own decision rather than to depend with others, then
automatically the relationship with
go strong for future life, on the top of that saving money, many families are moving to major cities and aboard to earn good income and plan to save money for future purpose due to small group they easily gain good amount.
Suggestion
to
On the other hand
, they are several disadvantages for this
, mainly missing the family values because if every
all people
everyone
one
is intersted
having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
entrusted
for
micro families the Suggestion
in
cureent
generation don't know the relationship between others in their group and mostly forget about the traditions in their house like a flow of electricity through a conductor
current
poojas
and respect to older members. On the top of that no one side of one leaf (of a book or magazine or newspaper or letter etc.) or the written or pictorial matter it contains
pages
one
teaching moral values ,
due to small house the main persons Accept space
,
are
always busy with job schedules, Suggestion
is
therefore
no one
teaching
their kids for what is good and bad Suggestion
teaches
is teaching
hence
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
highly
impact on their future. Suggestion
high
For Instance
, In many developing countires
like India and Brazil, many traditions are a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
disapparing
due to current generation is moved to big cities and they don't have time to learn and no the act of leaving secretly or without explanation
disappearing
one
ready to teach them.
In conclusion, current people are intersted
to stay with their own people rather than to stay with having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
entrusted
other
family member like Uncle and aunt based on any of various alternatives; some other
another
this
their are several advantages like personal bond will increase and save money but same time they are many disadvantages like missing family roots and traditions.Submitted by chigurupati on
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