Many people think hosting an international sporting event is beneficial to a country, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In the developing countries, many people are suggesting for

only international sprots

Suggestion

the only international sports event

only international sports event

an only international sports event

event

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due to mainly economy

change but

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change, but

same

time

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some social

activies

any specific behavior

activities

are not recommend

Suggestion

are not recommending

are not recommended

don't recommend

do not recommend

this

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due to

serval

Suggestion

Serval

survival

issue. In my

opinion coundating

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opinion, conducting

opinion conducting

one

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big

event

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will change

country

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growth.

Firstly

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, nowadays many developing countries like India and Brazil are suffering with several

issue

Suggestion

issues

like employment and revenue growth, to overcome

this

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every

one

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recommend

Suggestion

recommending

that to government should

Suggestion

that government should

organize

one

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game

event

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like cricket or football championship for worldwide

countries

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countries, therefore

therefore

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many jobs will come and same

time

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different ways of revenue will generate to the

country

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Tourisam

Suggestion

Tourism

and

Traval

Suggestion

Travel

Secondly

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, due to

this

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kind of

event

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the current generation will

intersted

having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern

interested

for their traditional sports

therefore

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in future many starts will

born

Suggestion

bear

hence

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it will use for the nation.

For Example

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, In 2017 Brazil was conducted football

worldcup

Suggestion

then

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automatically

tourisam

the business of providing services to tourists

tourism

growth got increased for

last

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2 years and same

time

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many hidden places in the

country

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got

famoused

extremely hungry

famished

. On the

Otherhand

Suggestion

Other hand

, same

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time many

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time, many

social persons

are denied

Suggestion

deny

the statement and suggested not to conduct any events because of environment and other issue like water and air, if any

country

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organized

big

Suggestion

a big event

event

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it's automatically effected to

environment

Suggestion

the environment

due to many trees will destroyed due to new

constration

the act of constructing something

construction

to be

build

Suggestion

built

and

it's

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

impact

Suggestion

water and air

pollucation

the act of bringing something to bear; using it for a particular purpose

application

, on the top of that once

event

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completed no

one

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use

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this

plural of "this"

these

grounds

therefore

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many

Suggestion

much

money will waste. In conclusion, In my opinion, if any nation planned for

big

Suggestion

the big event

a big event

big events

event

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in their

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country

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country, then

then

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automatically it's increase with

different way

Suggestion

different ways

a different way

of money like

tourisam

the business of providing services to tourists

tourism

, travel and

this

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revenue will change the face of the nation, same

time

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many young starts are

intersted

having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern

interested

to learn their sports.

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Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

293 words

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