In some countries, health care and education are only partially funded by the government. Some people argue that the government should be responsible for covering the full cost of these services. Do you support or oppose the opinion? Explain your position.

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The
government
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in some countries spends only a few amounts of
money
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on health care and education. I believe that the
government
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should take care of all the funding required for the treatment of patients in hospitals and for covering the student's fees in schools. Some people cannot afford the hospital's and school's expense. Due to
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, some people are dying and some children are not able to get the high-quality education.
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, the life expectancy in some countries are declining because most of the civilians do not have enough
money
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to get their health-checkups done.
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, more than fifty percent of people in India are in below the poverty line which shows that they cannot afford to go to a prohibitive hospital, and students who do not get a proper education are likely to work at an early age.
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, health tests which are required to be done is so costly that people are not able to know the disease, they might be having. Consequences of it is so severe that people are dying. A survey done by the Delhi
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shows that the mortality rate of people who come under the poverty line are decreasing sharply.
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they do not have
money
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for the treatment, they do not deserve to die if the
government
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and rest part of the world has enough
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. In conclusion, the
government
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should look after all costs, which is required to get the treatments and health-checkups done.
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to that, they should
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open some new high-quality public schools so that students who cannot afford to attend an expensive school, at least they can get their learning from public schools.

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