More developing countries are given aid from international organisations to help them in their development plans.Some people argue that financial aid is important but other's argue that practical aid and advice are more important.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Today, many underdeveloped countries
recieve
get something; come into possession of
receive
financial
aid
from many global organisations, which have financial contributions from many of the rich countries.It is argued by some people that the practical
aid
and advice are more helpful, but others believe that the financial
aid
holds more importance.I am of the opinion that the practical
aid
and advice are more important than economic help for the developing countries. Many poor countries have very backward technological base to execute some of the very complex tasks needed to overcome the complex
hurldles
a footrace in which contestants must negotiate a series of hurdles
hurdles
being faced by their countries.Technical
aid
and advice in many
matters yields
Accept comma addition
matters, yields
more benefits than direct
aid
.
For instance
, when
ebola virus
Suggestion
the Ebola virus
Ebola virus
emerged in some
african
a native or inhabitant of Africa
African
countries the local health system was unable to asses the danger and implications of the spread of the disease.It was with the help of foreign medical teams that they were able to thwart the spread of the disease and
subsequently
managed to put it under control.
Practical
Suggestion
A practical aid
aid
in terms of giving scholarships at post graduate programs can
also
help the country to
develp
make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation
develop
their educational system which can go a long way towards self sustainability and
relaince
the physical property of a material that can return to its original shape or position after deformation that does not exceed its elastic limit
resilience
.Foreign
studied graduates
Accept comma addition
studied, graduates
can teach at their native countries and help them develop the pool of skilled and educated individuals for their country. Many of the major international organisations help the developing countries by
given
Suggestion
giving
them financial
aid
for their projects which in many instances is of little help owing to the circumstances that many of the countries at the receiving end, have a very poor accountability and audit systems.In many cases, the money
is not properly spend
Suggestion
is not properly spent
is not properly spending
has not properly spent
and is lost to corruption.Many a times direct financial
aid
is being spend
Suggestion
is spent
is spending
spending
spends
on
infrastructural
projects which have very narrow and limited long term
benfits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
benefit
and education and skilled education which form the
back bone
a central cohesive source of support and stability
backbone
of modern day economy are often ignored. In
concluion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
, even though the direct financial
aid
can be of some help under some circumstances, but practical
aid
in the forms of scholarships and technical education can help a developing country in the long run and can have long lasting effects on their economy and self sustainability.
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