International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. What is your opinion about this issue?
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tourism
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required a wide infrastructure like road, hotel and resort, part. a plane figure bounded by two radii and the included arc of a circle
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. a particular environment or surrounding influence
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are dramatically decreased
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is dramatically decreased
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influvence
the a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influence
over all
involving only main features
overall
developement
of the act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
developments
socity
through the an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
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developement
.
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tourism
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tourism, however
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resourese
should be in a proper available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
resources
resource
mananer
in order to avoid any harmful how something is done or how it happens
manner
tretement
to the natural environment.a profession of belief
testament
treatments
treatment
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